The second outcome of this class requires students to "read, analyze and synthesize complex texts purposefully in order to generate and support writing." The paper I believe accomplishes this goal is my long paper, "Campaigns and Complaints". As I have previously mentioned, I used Anandi Ramamurthy's article "Constructions of Illusion" to prove to the editor-in-chief at Seventeen magazine that the ads featured in the magazine are detrimental to our society, and more particularly, young women. I show throughout this paper that I have a firm grasp on the text as I use it to support my claim. In order to make my argument more persuasive, I often "summarized, cited, applied and re-contextualized" Ramamurthy's article and ideas, and applied those ideas to my own (see excerpt 5).
By juxtaposing my ideas with the text, my writing became "intertextual, meaning [I created a] 'conversation' between the text and [my] ideas" in order to really prove the advertisements featured in Seventeen magazine commodify the female body and are thus harmful to today's young women (see excerpt 6). I also "demonstrate[d] responsible use of the MLA system of documenting sources throughout all of my papers (see excerpt 7).