Four Square Paragraphs and Gradual Release of Responsibiltiy
Context:  This lesson was implemented in the fourth quarter of the program during my full time student teaching at an elementary school in the Bellevue school district.  My classroom consisted of 25 multi age 2/3 students with a broad range of needs and talents.  This lesson took place in the middle of our writing unit based off of the Four-Square Writing method.  Although the district uses this method, this was not our sole source for writing instruction this year.  

Target 1A - Subject Matter Knowledge
The TEP student will demonstrate deep knowledge of subject matter and create learning experiences that make subject matter meaningful and understandable to students.  Deep knowledge includes an understanding of: central concepts, thinking/inquiry strategies, dispositions (curiosity about and appreciation of) and strategies of communicating.  

Several weeks of Four Square planning was instrumental in developing a deep knowledge of subject matter.  From the curriculum guide, I adapted each lesson to the writing continuum and goals for each student.  Teaching this method of writing became a much bigger task as I realized the scaffolding required for each skill.  Adapting and modifying for our special needs students gave me the opportunity to delve deep into the theories and concepts of the Four Square method.  

Target 1D - Subject Matter Assessment
The TEP student will understand and use formal and informal assessment strategies to evaluate and support learners' development of central concepts, thinking/inquiry strategies and strategies of communicating in the disciplines.  
Several formal and informal assessment strategies were applied when teaching this unit.  I developed all assessments to be easily executed during my lessons.  For this particular lesson, because students used prior skills to generate ideas for topic sentences and then later created detail and supporting sentences along with a closing feeling sentence, assessing each students' participation along with their knowledge of the subject matter was a difficult task.  The underlying theme developed early on, as I had a few students writing with exquisite word choice and fluency along with using smart edit skills to several students who needed a scribe and added assistance to complete the work.        

Reflection:
Gradual release of responsibility was my main focus after rereading and studying my own work.  Releasing the responsibility from myself as the teacher, onto the shoulders of my students is probably the most intricate and yet rewarding experience that I look forwarding to taking.  In my classroom I want every student to know the mantra "It is ok to fail!"  And to be comforted in knowing that if at first they don't succeed, it is encouraged and right to try, try again!  As I strive to set up my students for success (rather than failure), I still aim for the class to be aware that it is ok to not find the right answer; it is ok to not know the answer; it is ok to be wrong and it is ok to make mistakes.  Without those mistakes and wrong answers, we might not learn as much!  While some of my students flourished with the writing skills, I had more than a handful of students (due to special needs or language barriers) that struggled with many of the Four Square writing activities.  Several times each week I would sit down with my mentor teacher and discuss each day in detail, looking at what worked well and aspects of the lesson I can work on.  Many times I was stuck with the frustration that I wasn't reaching each student or allowing room for each student to achieve a higher potential.  Finally, as we neared the end of the unit and the class felt accomplished and confident with their writing skills, we began a new concept of developing topic sentences.  Even after providing strong scaffolding for students that still needed help, the learning for my more capable students was limited.  

After being well versed in the subject matter and being able to appropriately assess each student; I still felt a void in my lessons.  Now reflecting on this, I realize that I didn't understand or see the need for gradual release of responsibility.  How can I push my students to independence without hindering their learning?  Am I giving some students too much support without room to make discoveries independently?  How do I take 25 students, with reading levels from late kindergarten to fifth grade and give them risk-taking experiences and still assess and address all students and their individual needs, all in a forty minute lesson?  When is it the right time for me to encourage each student to adopt responsibility?  I don't have the same expectations or goals for each student.  Reflecting on this gradual release of responsibility has brought me to think more in depth about how a student can be capable of a task, but still given the opportunity to be responsible for extending the learning.    

Failing is not acceptable in many cultures and communities.  Looking at how our society views failure helped me think about what this means for my students in a larger picture.  In sports there are winners and losers.  We have grades and assessments.  It seems as though there is a negative stigma given to a child who receives a C average, yet studied every night with a tutor and is reaching his or her potential.  I know that even in my own learning community of the masters program that I feel pressured to receive a 4.0 on assignments because I am afraid of a lower grade or having a label that would insinuate "failure".  How will I be able to encourage my students to become active members in society if I don't encourage taking risks and gambles?  If my students can be ok with failing, they can apply that confidence throughout their lives.  Taking risks and making mistakes can bring my students more knowledge and learning than playing life safe and not stepping out of their comfort zones.    

A life spent making mistakes is not only more honorable but more useful than a life spent in doing nothing.
-George Bernard Shaw







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